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She sat alone on her bed
Thinking about what she had just said
She said it right but she knew it was wrong
She didn't know it would take this long

She never meant to feel heartbreak
She wants to take away this thing she hates
She cried herself to sleep last night
She tried to stop with all her might

She kept waking up but she had barely slept
She cuddled up to his jacket which she had kept
Her alarm went off with a loud ring
She hurriedly dried the tears she had been crying

The day ahead of her was long enough
She won't cry all day but it'll be tough
Her eyes water every five minutes
She knows she's suffering but she has to get through this

She thought it was over and that she didn't love you
She believed this to be true but she never knew
These feelings were real and after all of this
She never guessed that might be their last kiss

Her stomach hurts and her heart aches
These feelings inside she cannot fake
Her mind is tired and her body is sore
She doesn't think she can take much more

It hasn't even been a full day
She notices this much to her dismay
She wants to cry out and say a plea
She wants to know how to end this misery

She doesn't want to lose him after all this time
She feels like she's about to lose her mind
That's just a better way to say she's going insane
She's shooting for control but she just can't aim

She thinks about him every waking moment
She sees his hand and longs to hold it
She wants to say she's sorry so badly right now
But at this moment she doesn't know how

The only way she knows how to get through heartbreak
Is to build up some kind of hatred she knows is fake
The only problem is he is who she could never hate
She wants to solve this before it's too late.
©2009 ~Blaze157
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umm yeah 15 minutes.
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:iconhyday-shido:
aww this is so good :iconsadplz: your SUCH a good writer sis. you really know how to get emotion in your work ^^

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(About humans) "They Fear what they do not understand, and they despise what they fear."-Janos Audron (Soul Reaver 2)
:icontalon4906:
This is great stuff. instant fave right here

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Immortality is only a cures while you have something to lose
:iconblaze157:
thank you, great inspiration from the worst times in life, right? =) and only fifteen minutes, great inspiration, but bad reason XD

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I found a picture of you on Google! X3 -> [link]
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Want to make more friends? Want to find someone who'll talk to you? Well then talk to me. I'll talk to you if you'll talk to me. :typerhappy:
:iconblaze157:
thanks, pretty much explains yesterday except for the two hour crying, which made my throat sore today from choking and crying. :/

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I found a picture of you on Google! X3 -> [link]
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Want to make more friends? Want to find someone who'll talk to you? Well then talk to me. I'll talk to you if you'll talk to me. :typerhappy:
:iconhyday-shido:
awww i am so sorry little sis :iconlovehugplz: i hope youll be ok :iconlovehug:

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(About humans) "They Fear what they do not understand, and they despise what they fear."-Janos Audron (Soul Reaver 2)
:iconblaze157:
yeah. i hope so too. and to think it's my fault in the first place.

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I found a picture of you on Google! X3 -> [link]
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Want to make more friends? Want to find someone who'll talk to you? Well then talk to me. I'll talk to you if you'll talk to me. :typerhappy:
:iconshadowtranier:
Wow,it's really good! :D

Faved~

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Got it memorized? *shot*
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Final fantasy nerd,and proud.

';Please tell me that is cherry soda and that my liver was NOT stolen from me.' - Me
:iconhyday-shido:
well whatever happens just know you have DA friends and family here, and we will always love and care for you ^^ we are your net so dont forget we are here XD :iconsuperglompplz:

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(About humans) "They Fear what they do not understand, and they despise what they fear."-Janos Audron (Soul Reaver 2)
:icontalon4906:
no problem. yea inspiration comes in strange ways, i only started writing the day after my gf broke up with me. haha nothing of mines really good but what can i say just had to get it out haha

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Immortality is only a cures while you have something to lose

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